Corrections on my admissions essays

For those of you that actually know me, you know that I’ve been eagerly anticipating the arrival of my acceptance letter to the university of my dreams! I’m all ready to pack up and move 800 miles in three months time. But here’s the issue… I can’t seem to get my admissions essays PERFECT. In other words, I haven’t even applied to my dream school yet. The deadline for my application is in three weeks on September 30th. So, as you can see, I’m in a pickle. I need constructive criticism on my short essays. I’ll post them (and wait for the massive corrections that are sure to come) individually on separate blog posts. Thanks for your help in advance. 🙂

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2 thoughts on “Corrections on my admissions essays

  1. I didn’t think you would continue this blogging stuff after our class ended! xD I thought I was the only one who wanted to keep going (besides the fact that I m gonna be taking another “Lindsay Class,” I’M NOT ALONE ANYMORE! 😀

    I haven’t ever been much of a fan of BYU, but I genuinely wish you luck on your admissions essays!

    -Jacob

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